The Surprise - an erotic short story I wrote
This is the first attempt of a story I wrote for my wife, hoping
it might awaken something. Well, didn't work for her,
so let me know if it does anything for you!
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It had been a typical day at work. Boring and monotonous,
and I was feeling a bit grumpy. Not to mention a longer than
usual drive back home. But, it was Friday and I did have the
weekend to look forward to. You had been at home and said
that you were going to have something ready for dinner.
I was starving too!
I walk through the downstairs door from the garage and announce
my presence. "Hello!"
No answer.
"Hello?" I restate as I walk up the stairs.
That's when I notice you. You have on some thigh-high
black patent boots that I had never seen before, a black
leather thong, a tight black leather corset, and a black
leather mask. In your left hand you are holding a collar
and leash, and in the right hand you hold a riding crop. Your
hair is pulled back into a tight pony tail. You are more beautiful,
sexy, and scary than I have ever seen you before. And I liked
it, as the rising bulge in my jeans showed.
"Oh... uh, wow!"
"Did I give you permission to speak?"
"Wha.."
"You aren't listening to me. I asked if I give
you permission to speak? There is only one word that should
come from your mouth."
"No."
"That is correct. Now, you may have noticed that I
am wearing some new things. Yes, they cost quite a bit. No,
I didn't use my allowance. And no, you can't bitch
about it, either. Do you understand?"
"Yes."
"Well, I figured out that if you were going to keep
bitching and whining like a little baby about wanting me
to take more control, I figured I would see how far you were
willing to take it. So, from now on, when we are alone, you
shall refer to me as Mistress. When you answer me, it will
be 'Yes, Mistress. No Mistress.' Do we have an
understanding?"
"Yep!"
"Excuse me?"
"Yes, Mistress."
"Hmmm, I can see that you are going to be a tough case.
From now on you are my slave. You are to do exactly as I say,
no questions asked. Now, slave, go to the bedroom. I have
some items in there that I want you to put on. Yes, I spent
money on those too. No complaining, though! I take care
of my slaves, after all."
My eyes must be as wide as saucers by now. For the first time
in a while I am speechless.
"Well, what are you waiting for?"
I start to move towards the bedroom and walk past you.
"No, no, no, that will never do. When I'm in control,
your head should never come above my waist unless I give
you permission. I think you should crawl on your hands and
knees, in fact. And while you are down there, I want you to
lick my boots. If you are kind to my boots, they will be lenient
on you."
"Yes, Mistress" I state as I get down on my hands
and knees. I run my tongue up the front of each boot as I hear
and feel the slap of the riding crop on my buttocks. More
sound than sting, but quite effective!
"That was just a love pat. Now, hurry up and get to the
bedroom and change. You have 5 minutes. If you aren't
done when I get in there, you will be punished."
I crawl to the bedroom, a blush rising to my cheeks. What
exactly had I gotten myself into? I knew you had potential
for being a commanding Mistress, but this was more than
I could ever expect!
As I entered the bedroom, I saw what I was to where. It was
a tight little set of rubber or latex underwear, wrist and
ankle cuffs, and a blindfold. Where had you gotten all of
these items? And how much would the credit card bill be this
month??? Hell, what did I care! As I stripped down and put
on my shackles, I noticed the tie-ups on each post of the
bed. Wow! You must have spent some time putting this together!
My cock was throbbing with anticipation and I was probably
more sexually excited than I had ever been in my life.
Unfortunately, all of my distraction and my unfamiliarity
with the items I was supposed to put on meant that I didn't
meet the 5 minute deadline came and went. You stepped into
the bedroom and a frown appeared (but was there a hint of
a grin I noticed?).
"You really are hopeless. I gave you a simple order
and you can't even do that."
"I'm sorry, Mistress."
"Yes, you are, and when I'm done you will be sorrier."
You sit down on the edge of the bed and pat your lap. I look
at you, unsure of what you want.
"Bend over on my lap. You are getting spanked."
Yikes! You are serious! I slowly bend over your lap. You
lay a big, swift smack square on my ass. That'll leave
a mark! You follow that one up with 4 more, each with a little
more sting. Through it all, I think my cock got even harder.
"I see that you find all of this exciting, huh?"
You reach between my legs and roughly grab my cock and balls.
"Hmmm, well, we won't need this thing for a while.
You might as well save it."
You put my blindfold in place and then order me to lay on the
bed, face up. You roughly grab each arm and leg and tie them
tightly to the bed-posts.
"You see, slave, your sole purpose is to pleasure
me. If you pleasure me, I may reward you with a little pleasure
for yourself."
"I only want to please you, Mistress."
"Good attitude! Well, we'll see if you can."
I hear an unzipping, but i can't tell exactly what you
are doing. I feel the mattress move and hear the leather
of your boots and corset creaking seductively. Before
I know it, you have your sweet, hot pussy square over my face
as you grab my hair and force my mouth into you.
"Lick me."
I willingly oblige you. My tongue slips along the outside
of your pussy, tracing a line from your ass to your clit.
"Don't tease me. Put your tongue inside of me
NOW."
My tongue slips between your pussy's lips, deep inside
of you, tasting the sweet and salty tanginess. I flick my
tongue up and down and press as deep inside of you as I can
as I suck your pussy into my mouth.
"Mmmm, you do have some talent. You may be worth keeping
around."
I intend to prove my worthiness of you and keep licking and
sucking, pulling your hard clit into my mouth, swallowing
your sweet juices and delighting in every moan of pleasure
you emit. Soon, your hips start to press down harder on my
face as you rock back and forth, pressing my nose and mouth
deep inside of you.
"Yes, that's it. Oh, yes!" you yell as I
feel a hard slap on my thigh. "Yes! Yes!"
I feel your body tremble as you orgasm over and over, never
once pulling off my face until you are fully satisfied.
"Mmmmm, " you groan, as you slide off me. "I
guess I will keep you after all! You know what, though? I'm
still not completely satisfied." I hear rustling
and am curious as to what you are up to.
"Being a woman sucks, sometimes. We always have to
put up with people wanting to put stuff in our holes. Well,
I think it's time for you to learn what it's like."
You untie my hands and ankles and order me to get on my hands
and knees. You immediately tie them off again and I feel
your hands slowly spread my ass cheeks. I am feeling very
vulnerable since I am still blindfolded.
That's when your well-lubed and gloved finger enters
my ass, pressing deep inside of me.
"What, a little shocking, isn't it? Trust me,
slave, this is nothing."
I have a feeling about what you are going to do, but am a little
skeptical.
You keep moving your finger in and out of my ass, stretching
it.
"Ohhhh" I gasp, working my ass back into your
hand. You pull your hand away immediately.
"I see you are enjoying this, huh? Well, unfortunately
you are not quite ready. You are quite a dirty boy and need
to be cleaned up back here."
A million thoughts moved through my mind. What exactly
did you have in mind when you said 'cleaned up'?
I didn't have long to wait. Unable to move I had to depend
on my hearing and I heard some definite sounds - water running,
the click of a clamp. I now KNEW for certain what I was in for.
You walked up behind me and I felt your hand on my ass. "OK,
slave, time to see if you have any self control. I'm
warning you. Spill a drop and it will be very, VERY hard for
you." That's when you pushed some kind of hose
in me. Not very large, certainly nothing I couldn't
handle. Then I heard and felt air pumping into the nozzle.
Where had you gotten a (commercial name)??? Someone had
been doing a lot of planning! A gentle fullness filled my
ass and stretched it out. By this time I could have easily
cut diamonds with my rock-hard cock.
And then it came. A gentle click and a warm feeling started
to spread through my stomach. Oh god it felt good. Good until
the unbelievable cramps started. My whole body tensed
up and I struggled to hold it in me, feeling at this point
like I could push the (commercial name) out of my ass.
"Oh, poor baby. Did I use a little too much peppermint
soap? Ah, too bad. You are very dirty and I will not fuck a
dirty ass." Huh??? Fuck a dirty ass? Oh, I'm in
for it now.
You reach down and gently rub my cramping stomach and squeeze
my balls. Your hand lightly brushes the underside of my
cock and it wiggles with anticipation.
The last of the water finally emptied from the bag and I hear
the clicking of the clamp.
"You are doing a very good job. Not a drop spilled.
I just hope you can hold it for 15 minutes."
"Fifteen minutes, Mistress?" I plead? The
cramps were tremendous.
"Fifteen minutes, no less, maybe more."
The minutes trickled by as my intestines screamed that
they needed to be emptied. My ass and leg muscles quivered
with the exertion of trying to control the spasms. I let
out a little whimper.
"Oh, having difficulty, are we? I'll help to
take your mind off of it." With that you put your head
down under my legs and suck my balls into your mouth, rolling
them around with your tongue. I moan with ecstasy and feel
like I will either cum or blow my enema out shortly. Then
you stop suddenly.
"What was that water I felt drip on me???" You
rub your finger up my crack. "I warned you!"
And with that you let go a mighty smack on my ass, and I holler.
"Don't yell out, slave. It will only make it worse."
And you let go with 4 more smacks, two for each butt cheek.
I have never hurt so wonderfully.
You look at the clock. "Well, well, it seems you did
a fairly good job of holding it. 17 minutes and counting.
So, do you feel like you need to relieve yourself?
"Yes, please Mistress. I beg you."
"Very well." You unlock my shackles and let
me go to the bathroom. "Make sure you don't make
a mess. Otherwise you will spend all night cleaning the
bathroom." I definitely made sure not to make a mess.
After what seemed like an eternity on the toilet, you come
in. My embarrassment is obvious. "Go take a quick
shower and make sure you scrub well." I willingly
oblige her, making sure my privates are very clean.
"Back on all fours. I have a little more planned for
you." I get back on the bed, on my hands and knees. You
immediately lock me down again.
Again I feel your lubed finger explore my now clean ass.
Describing the feeling of wonderful doesn't do it
justice.
That's when I feel something much larger than your
finger press against my ass. Yep, it's that big black
strap-on, and you are wielding it like a giant sword.
"Take a deep breath, cause you are going to feel a little
pressure." I can sense the grin as you say this.
That's when you press into me, filling me up completely.
I let a gasp and a little yelp escape.
"See! Well, don't worry, you'll get used
to it. You expect women to take this stuff all the time, right?
It's time you men got it back!"
You continue to press into me. It hurts a little, but never
has a little pain felt so good. Every once in awhile you smack
my ass, just to remind me who is in charge (like I could forget!).
My cock and balls are absolutely aching now. You seem to
sense this and see it as a good chance to tease and frustrate
me even more. You reach around with your hand as your "cock"
slams into my ass and run your fingernail down the side of
my penis. I jump as the unexpected pleasure shoots through
my body.
After a few minutes of teaching me a lesson with your thick
"cock" you decide I have had enough. You take
the big strap-on out of my ass and give me a swift slap on the
ass. You untie me again and you order me to stand up as you
remove my blindfold. I look down and see the glistening,
thick cock that you had used to teach me such a vital lesson.
"Well, slave, since you have been so good I am going
to give you a little treat." You bend over the bed as
you remove the strap-on and your panties.
"What are you waiting on? Do I have to spell it out for
you? Fuck me, slave! I want you to pound your cock into me
NOW!"
I immediately obey, as my aching cock dives deep into your
very hot, very wet pussy. I grab your hips and thrust inside
of you, feeling waves of pleasure shoot up my body.
You move your hands between your legs and stroke your clit
as I thrust deep inside of you, and also flick my balls with
your fingers.
After a few minutes, you look back over your shoulder and
give me an evil grin. I thrust into you and wonder what the
look is for.
"I want you to cum. Right now!" you command as
you tighten your pussy around my cock. This is more than
I can withstand and immediately I unleash a flood of hot
cum. I let out a deep groan and quiver with the release of
tension and pleasure.
"Mmmm, you have been very good. Now I want you to lick
my pussy clean and after that you will make me dinner. I want
a steak, cooked medium, with a baked potato. You can handle
that, correct?"
I nod my head and mumble "Yes, Mistress" as my
tongue roams around your hot pussy, gratefully cleaning
you.
Later, after dinner, you hold me in bed and gently pat my
rear. "You were real good today. Just think - tomorrow
will be even better!"
I grin and slowly fall asleep as the day that started out
badly ends on a very, very good note.
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